The person we are.

13 Nov

in the backround

a tip trat tap in the empty bathroom


against the wood we haven’t managed to take down yet.

your hands shiver against the door

and you return, crumbling your way up

the stairs, around the corner

falling into our bed.

Your breath bangs heavy you

aren’t the young boy I knew

those 10 or so years ago

in your dingy longjohns and

tshirts, your gauntness

your greatness in my sheltered eyes.

The weight shifts, a hand reaches to mine

the pressure, the pressure of years

of days and weeks and minutes

the time we’ve put together

the person we are.

4 Responses to “The person we are.”

  1. missy November 13, 2007 at 3:23 pm #

    Have I told you recently what a wonderful writer you are and what a pleasure it is to visit your splendid blog? No?
    Oh. Well then. Guess what?

  2. marcelarhodus November 14, 2007 at 6:05 am #

    … when I grow up, I want to write like you do… 🙂

  3. thordora November 14, 2007 at 7:47 am #

    awww ladies….making me blush.

  4. Marcy November 14, 2007 at 9:17 am #


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